Become Free poem
Dear Suzannah, Your poem ” Become Free” was very meaningful and I could really relate to it. One sentence you wrote that really stood out to me was”I will fly to the beat of the wind and the birds will be my orchestra.” I think this quote was very expressive and paints a picture in my head. Another sentence that I thought was interesting was”Echoes ring in my ears, the sweet sound of my destiny that is to follow.” This one quote just explains so much. I do agree with you in the poem when your basically saying that you want to break free. Thanks for your writing I look forward to seeing you write again.
April 27th, 2008 at 6:24 pm
Hi,
this is Suzannah. Thank you so much for commenting on my poem. I had a lot of fun writing it and hope to write more. Your insight was helpful.
thanks,
Suzannah